Today we have had a professional in the media industry, she has worked for the ITV and she is a journalist lecturer for UWE she came in to give us feedback about our foundation productions, Myra enjoyed our film, but with this she gave us a few things to improve on.
In the very first shot of the production when Nazo is walking down the street while the narration sequence is taking place she said there should be more shots from different angles taking place and not just the one which we originally had. These different shots could include a reverse angle shot and one following his feet and legs. It could also lead to a shot following him from behind him.
She also added so small improvements such as...
- use some different transitions between shots
- use some more close up shots to clearly show the characters emotions
- use a close up of the gun in the stare down scene
- shorten some of the parts which drag on for a little to long
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